This is a record of a class blog at Edmund Hillary School, Auckland, New Zealand.
Friday, 25 August 2017
Everybody should own a dog
Cute.
Keep you company.
Keep you warm soft.
To play with.
Chubby
Opening statement persuasive writing : dog. We should have a dog so we are not by how safe we will be with my dog and it will be cool because when we have no friends to play with at home we can play with how
p.1:dogs and we will have lost of fun with how dogs.everybody should buy a dog so you can have someone oh keeps you safe from peo
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